User talk:Yongmin Kim - Revision history

Tom Gluick: /* Final Comments */

Tom Gluick — Sun, 21 Dec 2008 18:03:49 GMT

Final Comments

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-	The length and content of you page is fine. The language has improved and the text is readable. The WIKIs are too sparse. You needed to illustrate your points by showing where the residues reside in the protein; just showing the residues in white space is not an effective method to make your point.	+	The length and content of you page is fine. The language has improved and the text is readable. The WIKIs are too sparse. You needed to illustrate your points by showing where the residues reside in the protein; just showing the residues in white space is not an effective method to make your point.
		+	<br/>
		+	Grade: 7/10<br/>
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		+	Dr. Gluick[[User:Tom Gluick\|Tom Gluick]] 20:03, 21 December 2008 (IST)

Tom Gluick: Final Comments

Tom Gluick — Sun, 21 Dec 2008 18:01:00 GMT

Final Comments

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	Grade: 7/9<br/>		Grade: 7/9<br/>
	Dr. Gluick		Dr. Gluick
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		+	== Final Comments ==
		+
		+	Hi gents:
		+
		+	The length and content of you page is fine. The language has improved and the text is readable. The WIKIs are too sparse. You needed to illustrate your points by showing where the residues reside in the protein; just showing the residues in white space is not an effective method to make your point.

Tom Gluick: /* Comments on your Outline */

Tom Gluick — Mon, 15 Dec 2008 18:12:50 GMT

Comments on your Outline

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	7. The group and me need to meet; I do not think you will get a reasonable grade otherwise.<br/>		7. The group and me need to meet; I do not think you will get a reasonable grade otherwise.<br/>
	Overall: The group has not done a very good job with the outline. <br/>		Overall: The group has not done a very good job with the outline. <br/>
-	Grade: 6/9<br/>	+	Grade: 7/9<br/>
	Dr. Gluick		Dr. Gluick

Yongmin Kim: /* Comments on your Outline */

Yongmin Kim — Sat, 13 Dec 2008 02:52:49 GMT

Comments on your Outline

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	5. You also do not have any WIKI applets in the text to illustrate what you have written, but to your credit references are present. <br/>		5. You also do not have any WIKI applets in the text to illustrate what you have written, but to your credit references are present. <br/>
	6. I think you have the residues involved in the chemistry. <br/>		6. I think you have the residues involved in the chemistry. <br/>
		+	7. The group and me need to meet; I do not think you will get a reasonable grade otherwise.<br/>
	Overall: The group has not done a very good job with the outline. <br/>		Overall: The group has not done a very good job with the outline. <br/>
	Grade: 6/9<br/>		Grade: 6/9<br/>
	Dr. Gluick		Dr. Gluick

Yongmin Kim: Comments on your Outline

Yongmin Kim — Sat, 13 Dec 2008 02:51:15 GMT

Comments on your Outline

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	[[User:Eran Hodis\|Eran Hodis]] 15:23, 17 November 2008 (IST)		[[User:Eran Hodis\|Eran Hodis]] 15:23, 17 November 2008 (IST)
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		+	== Comments on your Outline ==
		+
		+	Comments <br/>
		+	User: Yongmin <br/>
		+	Assignment 11: IVB: Glu binding site: Map out the Glu binding site and explain how Glu binds, you will need to consider the inhibitor phosphothricin as a good analog of glutamate.[7] Indicate which amino acid residues are important in stabilizing Glu in the binding site. Indicate which residues are involved in chemistry.[2][8]<br/>
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		+	1. The first two sentences are not relevant to the topic and ought to be removed. <br/>
		+	2. You ought to start with a topic sentence—Glutamate is the first substrate to bind glutamate synthetase….. and build from there. <br/>
		+	3. You need to consider why phosphothricin was used instead of glutamate. <br/>
		+	4. I guess you tried to do this, but what you have written is imcomprehensible. I am not sure you understand how the enzyme works. <br/>
		+	5. You also do not have any WIKI applets in the text to illustrate what you have written, but to your credit references are present. <br/>
		+	6. I think you have the residues involved in the chemistry. <br/>
		+	Overall: The group has not done a very good job with the outline. <br/>
		+	Grade: 6/9<br/>
		+	Dr. Gluick

Eran Hodis: Glu binding site

Eran Hodis — Mon, 17 Nov 2008 13:23:18 GMT

Glu binding site

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	'''Welcome to ''Proteopedia''!''' We hope you will contribute much and well.		'''Welcome to ''Proteopedia''!''' We hope you will contribute much and well.
	You will probably want to read the [[Help:Contents\|help pages]]. Again, welcome and have fun! [[User:Eran Hodis\|Eran Hodis]] 23:48, 16 November 2008 (IST)		You will probably want to read the [[Help:Contents\|help pages]]. Again, welcome and have fun! [[User:Eran Hodis\|Eran Hodis]] 23:48, 16 November 2008 (IST)
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		+	== Glu binding site ==
		+
		+	Dear Youngmin,
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		+	You created the page Glu binding site in Proteopedia. Pages in Proteopedia should only be created if they are going to address a particular topic. Since you're not creating a page on Glu binding site but rather doing your project for a class, please remove all your content from the page Glu binding site that you created and place it on your user page [[User:Youngsen_Jeng]], I will then delete the page Glu binding site. Please do not put your project scenes on any pages other than the Sandboxes for practice editing or your User page.
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		+	You can respond to me if you wish by writing on my User talk page at [[User_talk:Eran_Hodis]]
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		+	Best,
		+	[[User:Eran Hodis\|Eran Hodis]] 15:23, 17 November 2008 (IST)

Eran Hodis: Welcome!

Eran Hodis — Sun, 16 Nov 2008 21:48:04 GMT

Welcome!

New page

'''Welcome to ''Proteopedia''!''' We hope you will contribute much and well.
You will probably want to read the [[Help:Contents|help pages]]. Again, welcome and have fun! [[User:Eran Hodis|Eran Hodis]] 23:48, 16 November 2008 (IST)