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'''Welcome to ''Proteopedia''!''' We hope you will contribute much and well. | '''Welcome to ''Proteopedia''!''' We hope you will contribute much and well. | ||
You will probably want to read the [[Help:Contents|help pages]]. Again, welcome and have fun! [[User:Eran Hodis|Eran Hodis]] 03:55, 15 October 2008 (IST) | You will probably want to read the [[Help:Contents|help pages]]. Again, welcome and have fun! [[User:Eran Hodis|Eran Hodis]] 03:55, 15 October 2008 (IST) | ||
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| + | Assignment 12: IVC: Ammonium Binding Site: Map the Ammonium binding site and explain how it contributes to cataysis.[9]<br/> | ||
| + | 1. First paragraph, drop the human reference, not relevant.<br/> | ||
| + | 2. Use subscripts and superscripts. <br/> | ||
| + | 3. Make sure the equation is balance by charge.<br/> | ||
| + | 4. The structure is not arranged as two face-to-face benzene rings; try again. .<br/> | ||
| + | 5. Use the angstrom symbol and you used a O instead of a 0. .<br/> | ||
| + | 6. Use the reference format I use in my page. .<br/> | ||
| + | 7. Glutamate has the highly negative carboxyl group which may directly interact with the positively charged ion due to its flexible side chain (Liaw et al., 1995). Are you sure that Liaw stated this, since glu binds first and then it is phosphoryated before ammonia interacts with the enzyme, so I thought. <br/> | ||
| + | 8. Which glutamate are you talking about be clear. You can use more WIKI applets to illustrate your points. <br/> | ||
| + | 9. A deprotonated ammonia completes the reaction after an ammonium ion binds to the negatively charged pocket of GS (Liaw et al., 1995) this sentence is awkward. <br/> | ||
| + | 10. Please schedule an appointment. <br/> | ||
| + | 8.5/9<br/><br/> | ||
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| + | Dr. Gluick | ||
Revision as of 05:32, 13 December 2008
Welcome to Proteopedia! We hope you will contribute much and well. You will probably want to read the help pages. Again, welcome and have fun! Eran Hodis 03:55, 15 October 2008 (IST)
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Assignment 12: IVC: Ammonium Binding Site: Map the Ammonium binding site and explain how it contributes to cataysis.[9]
1. First paragraph, drop the human reference, not relevant.
2. Use subscripts and superscripts.
3. Make sure the equation is balance by charge.
4. The structure is not arranged as two face-to-face benzene rings; try again. .
5. Use the angstrom symbol and you used a O instead of a 0. .
6. Use the reference format I use in my page. .
7. Glutamate has the highly negative carboxyl group which may directly interact with the positively charged ion due to its flexible side chain (Liaw et al., 1995). Are you sure that Liaw stated this, since glu binds first and then it is phosphoryated before ammonia interacts with the enzyme, so I thought.
8. Which glutamate are you talking about be clear. You can use more WIKI applets to illustrate your points.
9. A deprotonated ammonia completes the reaction after an ammonium ion binds to the negatively charged pocket of GS (Liaw et al., 1995) this sentence is awkward.
10. Please schedule an appointment.
8.5/9
Dr. Gluick
